Friday, 17 August 2007

Writing: Sense Poems


Pineapple
Looks Droopy, amazing, exquisite.
Sounds Sleepy, peaceful, quiet.
Smells Lovely, sweet, grand.
Tastes Yummy, perfect, chewy.
Feels Smooth, soft, splendid.
By Lucas

Pineapple
Looks Odd, yellow, oval.
Sounds Quiet, ideal.
Smells Sweet, wonderful, grand.
Tastes Chewy, disgusting, sour.
Feels Yucky, spikey, hard.
By Jacob

2 comments:

Durff said...

I think it is wonderful. it is cool .

Anonymous said...

I go with you jacob you rock