Friday, 17 August 2007

Writing: Sense Poems


Pineapple
Looks Droopy, amazing, exquisite.
Sounds Sleepy, peaceful, quiet.
Smells Lovely, sweet, grand.
Tastes Yummy, perfect, chewy.
Feels Smooth, soft, splendid.
By Lucas

Pineapple
Looks Odd, yellow, oval.
Sounds Quiet, ideal.
Smells Sweet, wonderful, grand.
Tastes Chewy, disgusting, sour.
Feels Yucky, spikey, hard.
By Jacob

2 comments:

. said...

I think it is wonderful. it is cool .

karl said...

I go with you jacob you rock