Monday, 11 June 2007

"The Goose And the Golden Eggs." We are learning to retell stories using adjectives (describing words).


The Goose And The Golden Eggs.
Retold by Caitlin
(My favourite part)

Once there was a farmer with hairy legs and a wife that smelt of perfume. They went to get a waddling goose. The next day the goose had laid a golden egg, then every day the goose laid a golden egg. The more eggs the more greedier they became.

The Goose And The Golden Eggs.
Retold by Ethan

Once there was a farmer with hairy legs and his mean wife. Together they bought a white goose. The next morning the farmer’s wife found a golden egg under the goose. Every morning the farmer's wife kept finding golden eggs and sold them. One day the farmer's wife said "We should kill the goose". So they killed the goose. "Oh silly me" said the wife.

2 comments:

Ethans dad said...

Great stories! Well done Caitlin and Ethan.

Anonymous said...

I like Caitlin,Ethan"s story, because they put it in order, like Mr Lietze asked.

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